Ohai
I suggest lowering the attack on the beginning synth, it sounds really harsh. LOVE the speed build up! Very creative execution. I feel like the bass needs more of a low, like really grimy. Nice kick, but add more tighteness to the low end of it (40-50khz). nice break @ 2:05. I'd love a pad break some where in this track! To me, the song did get a bit boring after awhile. 1:47 Id put a whole filter on it and bring it back up @ 2:00, that would be epic! 5/5 8/10 nice job
great job.
I want this song. Great emotion and song. I want it. Why couldn't I have made it? i'd soften the lead and tighten the bass up and add more high to it, TINY bit. Compress the kick to max it hit harder. I wish the bass wasnt so midi like. Thats only thing. Clean the mix up :) Great composition.
Mastering haha
The kick is muffled by the bass. The bass is way over powering. It feels like the whole song has a highpass on it >_< @1:31 it peaks really badly. That synth @ 1:40
needs to be a little more articulated with compression. Look up some vids on mastering. Learn a bit about mastering and layering, it will improve your songs massively.
Yeah I notice... XD And I will learn about this mastering, more. XD But I disagree with the sythn, you can barley hear it and plus that's just how it sounds normally. :/
1:31 is a reverb affect, so I don't know on that. But yeah the mastering is a problem. :P Also I just learned what layering is. I only one used lead in this song which is matches the bassline and everything in it. :/
You need more attention
Your music is quite professional AND unique, loved the effects. I felt the cymbals we a bit loud. Loved the breaks. groovy. :P
You're right on every count! ;) I turned down the volume on the hats and it sounds much better now. Thanks for noticing! :)
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THE VOCALS ARE SO NICE. I remember when I first heard this song, the vocals where stuck in my head for days. Yea, there are some mastering problems, but who cares. You're bounce trolololololol. insta 5 star.
Nice
I feel like the snare is kinda soft, sounds like its from the vec house expansion haha. Give it a little more high and compress nice and tight (twss) I think you should of kept more of the original melody in, its sick as heck ahha. nice intro, but the song needs a heavier drop I think. ;P
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Interesting progression, but still lacking in mix
The lead needs to be cut off, it's way too loose, I hear no kick, the cymbal is quite louder than the kick o_0 Strange. I personally cut the kick off at 40-55khz. Same with bass. Please compress the lead too, as well as the kick/snare/ w.e. This needs a lot of work imo, YOU REALLY need to look up a couple vids on mixing, it makes you music sound 100x times better. Nice melody though. Structure wise, it kinda drags on. Intro is the only listenable part imo :x Its all too noisy.
Great intro!
Love the little heart beat sound or whatever that is. When the kick comes in first, I feel like it need more umph. ya know? @1:33 that synth is nice sounding, but WAY too harsh, it kinda hurt my ears, it gets a little better when you start sidechaining it, but still, soften it a bit plox D: LOVELY kick, its great, probably my favorite element of the track, it really gives the song good drive. You broke up the sound really well! But the one thing I didnt like was the ending, it feel kinda lacking, and incomplete to me, but great instruments, mixing, structure and all! 5/5 10/10
Interesting haha
Very rough, but Im sure you will get better at putting together songs. BUT, the synth selection was spot on, very good choice of them. I really love that sine synth at 00:59, very pleasant sounding. This song has relatively NO mixing, everything is naked with rawness, which in this case, is bad imo. Look up some tuts on mixing in fl studio, they may seem boring, but they will help. Too much BOOM CLAP BOOM CLAP, mix it up a bit sometimes. Everything sounds pretty much like presets, which is ok when you're first starting off. But I feel like synths are something to try to be more original with ;) NJ for first track.
Thanks, appreciate your comment. (:
I'm looking forward to it!
Cheers,
DJ Serg-I-No.
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