Needs a lot of work.
Sounds like you just put a midi file and tweaked a couple notes. NO mixing at all. look up tutorials on parametric eq 2. this song is nexus overload too D: kick is weak, bass over powers ever thing. SOUNDS like it was made in fl. which is a bad thing. haha. you should cut off the bass @ 40-50khz and bump the low and high up on the kick. i think a more spacey pad would sound better. i hear gross beat too LOL. oh well. nice try. :) dont hate me for this.